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Comments from darthel0101
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2013-04-11 10:15:03 | All for Mr. Redman Chapter 11 | I was introduced to the power of your writing in CAW 13. The stories that I have read since then have only cemented that opinion. Your writing might include some errors but the imagery and emotion that you pack around them mask them from view. I am another reader who would love to see more writing by your hand and would really appreciate the continuation of your serialized stories which have been presented here. |
| 2013-04-22 06:04:56 | Boo 1 | a couple of comments - you need to have paragraphs : a wall of words will cause people to simply leave as soon as they arrive. - you need a little bit more length to the story : this one has not even finished the initial encounter |
| 2014-08-31 14:32:03 | Being More Social - Chapter 6 | I did not like this chapter because of the way you are portraying your protagonist. I will not vote neg on this chapter but I cannot vote pos. |
| 2013-04-30 07:35:30 | ARE WE TEACHING THE CHILDREN - OR ARE THEY TEACHING US? - PART 1 | You are dealing with this issue as well as you dealt with the neighbor's daughters. You are taking a statutory issue and dealing with it psychologically and honestly. For comparison, see Allison And The Primdales by daddycums elsewhere on this site. I would definitely like to see more of this work. |
| 2013-05-08 16:23:44 | Seducing my cute little cousin sister | a piece of advice regarding your formatting of your story Some people adjust their screens to display the text larger than the site normal. This means that if you cause the text area to be forced wider than normal then the reader needs to either scroll or resize. EITHER option will cause them to simply click away from your story. |