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Comments from darthel0101
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2014-05-18 13:29:44 | Boy in the grass 58 | Thanks for sharing your work again - it is, as always, superbly done. |
| 2014-05-19 08:01:50 | A guy and his.....? (2) (beginings) | interesting beginnings - I would love to see where you take this. |
| 2014-10-04 15:46:49 | A Good Man 4 | Sorry for two notes - when my screen refreshed, I found hard line feeds all over the place. I recommend letting the words wrap instead of using <Enter> unless actually starting a new paragraph and then using a double. |
| 2014-10-04 15:43:07 | A Good Man 4 | Thanks for the new chapter. I wish that your detractors would just grow up. ToucanPlay is feeling more like a harpy than anything else; I have yet to find a story with a positive vote from that nick and no comments anywhere. |
| 2015-03-04 07:17:32 | The Five Forms of Kimber Chapter 3: Water Stone | A good story line, I am glad to see you continuing to work various story types. |