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Comments from darthel0101
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2014-09-11 02:22:55 | Galactic Vendetta chapter 06 | There is an issue with your comma usage and it is very distracting. I did not vote down the story but could not, in honesty, vote up either. |
| 2014-09-26 09:50:50 | My Photogenic Mom 5 (corrected) | One of the things that a writer must be aware of is the vocabulary being used. I doubt that Susan's nipples received any teaching but am convinced that they were TAUT. The story was good even with the error, so a logged pos was recorded. |
| 2014-09-25 18:28:43 | My Photogenic Mom (Corrected | To the commenter unwilling to put their name to their comment: It is much easier (not to mention a HELL of a lot cheaper) to get fine grain film than high-definition digital. Film also gives plot line to the story that is impossible to do with digital photography. I was also unable to identify a year for the story and Camaro's have been around for decades. |
| 2014-02-10 05:02:20 | The Ticket VII & VIII | I am glad to see a new installment. Now I am waiting for the next - grumble. |
| 2014-09-25 17:01:16 | Revenge, Pt 14 The Truth_(1) | I would really like to see the continuation of this story; you are bringing out a lot of depth in a relationship normally seen as extremely shallow. |