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Comments from truebutchanged
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-06-02 05:44:11 | Doesn't Really Count, Does it? Part 1 | I apologize for the spacing guys. As I said, it was my first post on the site. Part 2, already published, has corrected this issue, as will all future posts by me. Thank you for your understanding, and hope you enjoyed anyway |
| 2012-06-02 05:52:57 | Doesn't Really Count, Does it? Part 1 | I apologize for the spacing guys. As I said, it was my first post on the site. Part 2, already published, has corrected this issue, as will all future posts by me. Thank you for your understanding, and hope you enjoyed anyway |
| 2012-06-18 18:20:12 | Doesn't Really Count, Does it? Part 1 | To the most recent commenter, Thank you for your honest opinion. I too, can not stand spelling and grammar issues when I am reading, yet I admit I am a terrible speller. I am usually pretty solid about using spell checker, however I am knew to using google chrome. With this web browser, if you paste text (which I did from notepad, which also doesn't have autocorrect) it will not underline errors until you touch that particular word. I am actually bummed I missed such an obvious one, but I inform you that I will be making another copy of the story, same story, but all three together in one part. I will surely correct these errors. Thank you for your critique, and I hope you enjoy the story once I fix it! |
| 2012-06-22 00:57:05 | A Good Fucking Night Part 1 | first poser. Actually, I meant what I said about swinging open the sliding door. I pictured the character just whipping his wrist and having the door slide completely open, which would be considered many words. Flinging, swinging, pushing, whatever I chose to put. Thank you for your input, but I plan on tying the characters together in the future stories. I would rather not have a 30 minute into to every story, so I decided to give more background than needed in the first part. Again, thank you for your input. I hope this cleared some of your issues? |
| 2013-12-22 10:26:39 | Breaking Sara | i liked it, but there wasn't enough dialog between the characters... the girl just didn't beg/put up a fight/whine/cry/scream enough, ya know? still, better than most on here |