| 2014-02-27 19:59:00 |
Running away with Rachael, part 1
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Fine story so far. It is also well written and well thought out. Please continue on with more Part's of thier journey and life in California and PLEASE don't end up turning this into a sad story. Thanks !! (countrycadillac) |
| 2014-09-24 21:42:05 |
My Photogenic Mom 5 (corrected)
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I have read a great many stories but I have just finished reading all five chapters of this beautiful, very well written story and I loved every word of it. Please write many more along these same lines and I shall read every one. THANK YOU VERY MUCH !! |
| 2014-02-27 17:38:15 |
Brotherload.
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OMG !!! This is a great story, you did good !! As for suggesting what comes next in chapter two I would leave that up to your great mind, I couldn't do better. Keep up the fine work. (countrycadillac) |
| 2014-02-20 17:47:09 |
The farmer's daughter_(0)
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What a great, wonderful story and very well written. Please continue on with another chapter. Thank You. (countrycadillac) |
| 2014-03-11 16:31:43 |
Another Barbara(pt1)
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OMG !!! That was soooo hot !! The writing & story line were excellent. Very professionaly done. I could read another 20 chapters of this writing. Thanks !! (countrycadillac) |