| 2014-01-18 18:51:43 |
Opening Laurie
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Great story. Your a fine writer. Keep up the good work. Thanks !! (countrycadillac) |
| 2014-01-19 00:07:54 |
Catherine and Michael
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What a beautiful story and so well written. This story could have been under "True Story". You are a fine writer, please keep up this fine work. Thank You. (countrycadillac) |
| 2014-01-21 21:13:10 |
Lake Tannin 3
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A really fun story and it could be true. Your a fine writer and I wish there could be more lake stories. Thank you. (countrycadillac) |
| 2014-01-31 20:33:06 |
Office Fun_(1)
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She is more than likely enjoying every second of his "orders". I once had a like situation with my female assistant but with one exception, she got PG ! Ha-Ha on me ! It was more than worth it, Maybe another chapter or two ?? Fine writing ! (countrycadillac) |
| 2014-03-02 20:29:45 |
A Norwegian Sex Story
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OMG !!! Are you always in such a hurry. Take your time and give better details, make a real story out of it even if you have never been with a female. I might suggest before writing any more that you go out and find a chick who will let you discover what you are writing about. Good Luck !! (countrycadillac) |