| 2013-09-27 14:51:33 |
Random Encounters
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OMG !!! That was a very HOT story. You sure do know how to describe a very hot session. More !! More !!! (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-09-29 12:09:14 |
Such good friends, the bus ride
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What a great story and so well put down on paper. I enjoyed every word. Please write more and Thanks Again !!! (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-10-02 11:45:21 |
Fantasy Fulfilled_(2)
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I was into your story from the very start, I could not belive anyone could be so perfect in describing details as you have done. PLEASE continue on with this in another chapter or two. Maybe the man is able to find out her name and her company and is at the next hotel she visit's in the future. Your writing is perfect, I find no faults with it. THANK YOU !! (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-10-02 15:49:18 |
Tara, her live-in boyfriend and me!
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"O", this was so hot that we sure do need more chapters to see them raise thier own family, make hot love and just go plain crazy !! Great writing !! Keep up the good life !! (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-10-03 13:09:29 |
It began with Rape and ended with Desire.
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I'm not sure how to explain what I feel of your storm. First, I didn't feel that it flowed evenly. Second, there seemed to be Too much detail, some of which was unrelated to the time. I may be wrong but it seems maybe you didn't actually read the storm AFTER you were done ? As you get more experience you may understand my opinion. Good luck in your future writings, I'm sure you will do well. (countrycadillac) |