| 2013-09-16 14:59:18 |
"THE LOOK"
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GOOD GRIEF !!!! Some commenter's sure are "know it all's". Why don't they have gut's enough to put thier name on thier comments.!!! WHY ?? Because thier only full of "B/S". SO, you did a fine job of writing, keep it up. I'll be watching for more chapter's on this tale. Good Luck !! (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-09-16 15:14:03 |
"STEAMING LUST"_(1)
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Reasonably well done, a little longer would be nice. You should make a fine writer. Keep up the good work. (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-09-17 13:26:14 |
"RED BUSHED BEAUITY"
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WAyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!! too short. You started off great then jumped off a cliff to the end. Slow down. PLEASE!! |
| 2013-09-23 14:17:46 |
My friend's mom all over_(1)
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I can not belive the total mess this story is in. Anyone over third grade can see you don't know ANYTHING about spelling or do you know how to put wording together so the reader can understand what your saying. As far as I an concerned don't bother writing any more stories. I won't read them !!! (countrycadillac) |
| 2014-08-05 20:26:34 |
Foxy Knoxy -IV Meredith's Gang Bang
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A so-so story. Actually rather bouring. If your enjoying yourself continue. |