| 2013-08-25 11:55:08 |
My Journey to Becoming a Slut - Part 1
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Great story but about one third into it the guys turned into girls ?? Maybe before you print out your story you should "proof read" it. I'm waiting to read the next chapter. Thanks & good luck !! (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-08-26 11:17:02 |
Nursing Mr Peters
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VERY WELL WRITTEN !! You give your reader a feeling of being there and seeing everything as you discribe it. This is something many writers can not do. I would very much enjoy reading many more chapters of your fine work. Good Luck !! (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-08-26 15:13:11 |
Audrey pays me a visit
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Great story, just a little short. Can't wait for Chapter 2 and beyond. (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-08-26 15:40:49 |
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The only thing worse than your spelling/use of words is the extreme shortness of your story. Hurry up with more chapters. (countrycadillac) |
| 2014-01-26 21:24:44 |
Sharing my wife with a young stud
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What great memories this brought back. Your story was very accurate and also well written. Please continue with the new third male member that joins the party. That should be a nice looong story !!! Thanks ! (countrycadillac| |