| 2013-08-27 14:03:10 |
big long hard suprise for my cousin on her bday.....(My side)
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What a joke !! You must have got kicked out of school around the fifth grade. Your word usage and spelling is unbeliveable. I would strongly suggest you plan on something other than writing to make a living. (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-08-29 12:46:16 |
Confessions of a Divorce Attorney
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Pretty much well written until towards the end you seamed to rush it to the finish. Not an uncommon thing for sex stories. You will make a fine writer. Good Luck !!! (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-08-29 16:35:05 |
Wife's Encounter with Jake
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A great story and "yes" you did describe the way it was happening very well. It reminded me of a vacation back in 1968 that our group of swingers (8 couples) took to Mexico. The private "resort" we were at invited all of us to a special show inside thier barn. They had a wooden afair that looked like a half circle on the ground about 4 foot tall with a large opening in the center , middle of it. A very nice Mexican lady crawled into it and stuck her butt out of the center and a mule was lead out and he mounted this wood thing and FUCKED this woman for about 15 minutes. We collected dollars from our group and gave her the money. What a show !!!! (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-08-30 12:22:08 |
My trip to corporate
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Don't listen to these "Anonymous" jerks !! There not man enough to put thier handle on thier comments. Very interesting story, could very well be true. As a traveling salesman I found many things in it that I have experienced myself on the road. Only once tho with another male present, actually her husband. On a scale of 10 she was a 12+. That was back in the late 1970's and I still remember it well. You should consider a "Proof Reader" for your stories but I belive you will do great. Good Luck !! (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-08-31 13:34:45 |
How I lost my virginity with my aunt
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Actually I belive this is a true story. Keep writing if you enjoy it. Good luck with your Aunt. (countrycadillac) |