| 2013-08-17 10:32:05 |
My naughty neighbor
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Your a fine writer, actually better than many that were born to the English language. You have a very good feeling for words that gives the reader a feeling of being right there in the action. Please continue this story on for many more chapters. Thank you ! (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-08-18 12:50:35 |
An after school suprise
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Too little, too fast. Slow down, think about your story line for an hour or so and then slowly start writing going back and re-reading what you have every half hour or so. When you feel your finished comes the most important job of all, Proof Read every word, make changes as needed and you will be one of the best writers there are. Good Luck !! (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-08-18 13:08:14 |
A true threesome story - I love getting revenge
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Hot ! Hot ! Hot ! , As someone who's been there, done that I almost burst out in flames .. Your a fine writer and you could have a future in this business. I'll be watching for your future workks. Good Luck ! (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-08-19 09:44:53 |
An after school suprise, chapter 2
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WAY too short. Interesting story and could be true. You need to Proof Read your work BEFORE you send it off. Good Luck ! (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-08-19 10:03:40 |
Dharma Cheats On Greg With Ted
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Been there done that. IF, as a couple you are both OK with that then it will result in the hottest thing the two of you can share. I can say, from experience that if both of you are OK with an open marriage your marriage will be the strongest union you can have. Good job on your writing and good luck in the future. (countrycadillac) |