| 2013-07-28 15:36:41 |
16 Slut
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VERY HOT !!!!! I loved it !!! Please make chapter 2 much longer so the top of my head spins completely off !! (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-07-29 10:43:00 |
Ryan (Part One /Revision of Student Painter)
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Even better the second time around. You are one fine writer and I look forward to many more chapters. (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-07-29 14:36:27 |
Fucking just for fun
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Great story, well written. WAY TOO SHORT !! How about more chapters ?? Countrycadillac |
| 2013-07-30 12:36:47 |
My Sister and I for the first time_(0)
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Why is it that we always have to have at least one IDIOT in the comments?? All ot your writing is very well done and for a change written by someone who knows how to space. My only suggestion would be to "Proof Read" your story slowly before sending it out. That way you can catch those little "goofs" that we all make. Keep up the fine work. (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-07-30 12:56:36 |
New Girl in Town - Chapter 1
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Although I loved the story I think the writers EGO was showing thru. If you noticed the stories with the girl next door and her puppy dog lover always seem to get the 96 to 98 scores. I still think you have a lot going for you and you will be sucessful. (countrycadillac) |