| 2013-07-22 13:13:51 |
Ashley is forced to have sex by her "friends" - Part One
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What a farce !! This is NOT how a professional writer would end his story. Never,Never,Never!! Now when someone see's your name next to a story title they will just keep going. Actually not a surprise as the story was a little rough anyway. ??? |
| 2013-07-22 13:22:53 |
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This is, without a doubt the worse story I have ever read !!!!! Find some other hobby as writing is not one for you. (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-07-23 13:43:10 |
Falling In, Part 4
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WOW, you really got it down perfect, now take it and run with it, as many chapters as you can fly with. Great writing, 5 stars !!(countrycadillac) |
| 2013-07-23 14:21:57 |
What a fucking wedding night!
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It was different ?? The same thing as I recall saying when I read it ten or twelve years ago. "O" well some people are just plain lazy !!!!! (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-07-24 16:08:04 |
Sandy and I
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BEAUTIFUL !! That is the only way to discribe your wonderfully written story. I would hope you could add many more chapters therefore making it large enough to be picked up for publication. Good Luck !!! (countrycadillac) |