| 2013-06-19 11:23:57 |
Poolside With My Daughter's Friend Amy
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Too much, too fast. Slo down so we all can enjoy all of the first time details. Great story, please continue ! |
| 2013-06-21 13:59:02 |
Incest Roulette_(0)
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Elimiate everything after " The games went on" and you have a First Class, Professional story. Just rewrite and enter the revised story along with Chapter 2. Good Luck !! |
| 2014-08-21 20:26:51 |
Mom's Motivational Techniques
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What a great, well written and HOT story this is. I very much enjoyed reading it. I do hope you will continue with more chapters until he is finished with high school and mom meets a hot single neighbor. Thank you for writing !!! |
| 2013-06-23 13:35:34 |
The Swiss Family Incest
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Great writing and story line. Please bring on more chapters. |
| 2013-06-26 12:52:38 |
Sis Comes Home for Memorial Day Part IV
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This was the very best chapter of all. The other chapters were fine but this ending was nothing short of true professional. Keep up the fine work as I will be watching for your future works. THANK YOU !! |