| 2013-07-19 15:26:28 |
a different night away part 1
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A great story line and fine form. Please continue on with more chapters. It's very nice to have something enjoyable too read. Thank you very much ! (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-07-20 13:02:16 |
The Stranger_(5)
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The story line was excellent, the spacing was wonderful ( it was very easy to read) and everything seamed to flow together. YOUR A GREAT WRITER !! (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-07-21 10:31:50 |
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Good stories are written with about 90% truth in the content. Don't try to pass off BS , the more honest you are the better your story will be. Also Proof Read your story when your done, your errors ruin your tale. Good Luck !! (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-07-21 14:46:53 |
Falling In, pt 3_(0)
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Very fine writing and form. I always enjoy a well done writing and yours have been upper class. Keep up the good work. (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-07-22 12:59:43 |
Her Name's Kimberly
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YOU STOPPED DEAD !! Your not getting away with that, we need more great details of the rest of your yummy adventures with this sexy chick. PLEASE !!!!!!!!!!! Good luck too you ! (countrycadillac) |