| 2014-09-15 20:17:01 |
My Husband´s Friend Visits Us
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Great, well written story, on to Chapter two. |
| 2014-09-15 20:32:46 |
My Husband’s Friend Visits Us - Part 2
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Chapter 2 as fine as chapter 1. I hope in chapter 3 she is DP'd and all enjoy themselves. Keep up this story as it could continue forever with him taking work locally. Thanks for writing !!! |
| 2013-08-06 14:08:54 |
My American Virgin
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What a perfect, well written story. It is full of happiness. I wouldn't change a word. (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-08-06 14:32:54 |
My American Virgin part 2
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You are too young to write such a perfect detailed story. Your writing far exceeds that of an experienced published writer. I can't wait too see what you do with chapter 3. May I please suggest, as an experienced writer that you immediately Copywrite your stories, otherwise someone else will make a fine profit from them. (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-08-10 11:59:40 |
Day At The Lake: Part 3
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Great story, don't change your form for some gutless comment who won't identify themselves. Your doing fine, keep up the good work !! (countrycadillac) |