| 2013-08-21 14:23:12 |
Home on Leave
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OMG !! So far this is the hottest short story I have read !!! Your discription's are first rate Plus ! Please don't even consider the low life bitching from those who don't have the gut's to put thier names with thier comments.. Good Luck !! (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-08-22 13:23:35 |
The Virgin Sister. Chapter One.
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You got off to a slow start but I'll give you credit once you got going you went full blast. I really did enjoy what you have written and encourage to continue. I belive you may make a very fine writer as you continue down this path. Also note in your header that your writing is copywrighted. Good Luck. (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-08-23 11:31:09 |
The Pet
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What a wild brain fuck this was. I don't belive I have ever read anything like this. If you picture the complete story IN YOUR MIND it really is very good. Nothing wrong with branching out into another mind warp. I'll have another serving, Please! (countrycadillag |
| 2013-08-23 14:52:12 |
Staying Alive 2
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Sorry about "Anonymous" comming up on my comment's about Chapter #1. I've read two of your stories so far (TTL 4 chapters) and I have enjoied them very much. I would say that this story is my favorite. Thanks much !! (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-08-23 15:29:00 |
Revenge_(2)
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Beautiful !! Now thats what I call Justice !! What a wonderful mind our author has. (countrycadillac) |