| 2013-09-08 11:35:35 |
My Virgin Sister : Chapter Three (Final Chapter)
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This can't be the end ?? They still need at least one or two chapters to seduce mom in the pool and then the bedroom. It's been a great story, enjoyed all of it. Thank's !! (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-09-09 17:50:52 |
Time on My Hands IRONY pt II
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Well, I have read both offerings and look foreward to number 3. You move a little fast for me but I am enjoying what I read and what the depths of your mind has to offer. Keep up the good work !! (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-09-13 14:24:23 |
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An author NEVER stops dead in the middle of a moment like this,. If you write more or not I won't be reading it. (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-09-13 14:45:07 |
He's back
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Great story, fine writing and form. Looking forward to chapter 2. Good luck. (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-09-13 15:04:55 |
massage fucked
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Good start for your first (?) writing project.. Maybe a little short but can tell by how Chapter 2 starts off. Maybe chapter 2 or 3 will have the husband joining in. I remember I always liked to do that after the wifes inital connecting with a new stud. Good Luck in your writing adventure. (countrycadillac) |