| 2013-09-14 12:13:17 |
Savannah_(1)
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This is a near perfect story, reasonally well written with good form, BUT you either need to slowly read what you have written and correct your many errors or hire a Proof Reader. So many writers that could be very successful are sloppy and just jump on to another story instead of finishing thier work. They never make top money. Too bad !! Good luck to you !! (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-09-15 09:57:38 |
My redhead sister's redhot love_(1)
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The story was fine. The wording and spelling was ugly !!! You need a Proof Reader to go over your stories BEFORE you let then out of your sight. Good Luck !! (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-09-15 09:58:03 |
My redhead sister's redhot love_(1)
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The story was fine. The wording and spelling was ugly !!! You need a Proof Reader to go over your stories BEFORE you let then out of your sight. Good Luck !! (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-09-15 09:58:26 |
My redhead sister's redhot love_(1)
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The story was fine. The wording and spelling was ugly !!! You need a Proof Reader to go over your stories BEFORE you let then out of your sight. Good Luck !! (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-09-16 14:39:38 |
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Great 2nd chapter. I'll watch every day as you continue with many more chapters. You are going to make a decent writer so keep it up. Don't pay any attention to that jackass at 20:43. He's a real jerk. Good luck !! (countrycadillac) |