| 2013-10-07 08:18:36 |
Kimberly's secret
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Very pleasent to read, well done but a little short. Please continue with more chapters. Thank you. (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-10-07 09:25:27 |
My Teen Love Triangle Part 5
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This is one of the most enjoyable, professionaly written love stories I have ever read. It was a pleasent change to have love take the lead over sex. I look forward to reading your next offering. Please be sure to copywrite this so someone else does not profit from your work. THANK YOU !! (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-10-14 13:49:31 |
Breeding Mrs. Gray pt 2_(0)
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Another hot chapter. Keep going, I'm about to melt. See you in Chapter 3. Good luck !!! (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-10-14 14:08:55 |
Family gathering_(0)
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A great story, so far ! Your next chapter COULD be a dilly, like the next years family get together, and a repeat of last years action. "O", such fun, a baby machine. Gool luck ! (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-10-14 14:37:51 |
Behind Those Glasses_(0)
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UMMmmm?? " I stuck the tip of my dick in my mouth " ?? Good story but you really need to "Proof Read" your stories when your done. Decent writing, good luck on future stories. (countrycadillac) |