| 2014-03-03 20:12:11 |
Daddy, no.
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VERY badly done. You need to spent a lot of time reading any of the stories that are 96% or higher to get a better idea of how a good story is written. Good Luck !1 (countrycadillac) |
| 2014-03-03 20:05:45 |
Mike and Angie part 2
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Very good story but a wee bit short. I'm sure she will feel much better when both guy's DP her that evening. (countrycadillac) |
| 2014-03-03 19:51:00 |
My Ex's Best Friend
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Very fine writing but way/way too short. Lets hear about him bringing along a friend for a DP ?? Nice hot chick ! (countrycadillac) |
| 2014-03-03 19:41:50 |
Him & Her part 1
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This was very different, well written but short. I enjoied it a great deal. Continue on with more of the same adding side item's to add to the interest. Thank You !! (countrycadillac) |
| 2014-02-02 21:24:18 |
Moms Weekend
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Poor story- Poor writing !! Not worth reading. (countrycadillac) |