| 2013-06-08 11:24:20 |
Susie-Lea, Chapt 4
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Wonderful, sad to see you are dropping it here. Hope you reconsider and revisit the two girls a couple of years later ?? Thanks for great reading. |
| 2013-06-08 13:34:56 |
Home alone with Alyssa part 4.
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DON'T CHANGE THE FORM OF YOUR STORY. You have written actually a real life pattern of what really happend's in real life. You should write what you belive in as a Professional Writer and go with your own flow . Good Luck !!! |
| 2013-06-10 14:32:10 |
Accidents Happen Part 3
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I've just finished reading chapters 1,2 & 3. What great writing and form plus a very hot story. I'll be waiting for chapter 4 with a hot 9 inches. |
| 2013-06-13 15:23:18 |
Amorous Brady Bunch Part 2
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All of my comments at Chapter one are just DITTO for Chapter two. I enjoyed both chapters very much. You are a fine writer. BOB |
| 2013-06-17 14:45:53 |
The Benefit of Friends_(0)
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Very fine story. Excellent writing and form. Yours was a different story line that you rolled out very well. Actually very professionaly. Keep up the fine work and I will be waiting for more chapters here. (countrycadillac) |