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Comments from Catmandue53
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-09-09 05:50:26 | Melissa's Initiation | . I started to remember, after I had read a few paragraphs, that I had read this story before. And do you know what? I just kept on reading because I also remembered that I had enjoyed this story immensely. It was a joy to read it again! I'd love it if you wrote more about what happened next! . |
| 2015-11-19 05:12:36 | The Family Truth Part : 1 | Are you seriously kidding me? Learn, at least, when to start a new paragraph. Your story looks like you typed it in as one very long paragraph, then went back and inserted breaks every two or three lines. Wow! I was not able to finish this story. |
| 2015-12-09 02:51:55 | It's All Relative | This story seemed to start out with a lot of promise, but sadly that promise never came to be and the ending was a dull as pudding. |
| 2016-03-05 05:33:34 | The I-Room IV | I really enjoyed this series!! I hope you write more of it!! |
| 2017-08-09 04:39:22 | Bad Influence #1 | I wasn't able to read this story, or it's follow-up because of the lack of space between sentences and paragraphs. I urge you to edit them to fix this problem. |