| 2017-08-28 17:37:05 |
My Endearing Angels: Part 2
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It been almost a year since you posted this chapter, will you be posting the third installment? |
| 2017-09-12 12:42:08 |
Controlling Sister
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I very good story, will there be more to this, a series maybe? You may wish to stop telegraphing the end though. By keep telling how the incestuous seed was being pushed inwards I figured out the ending. Actually a good idea would be for JP to continue the possession and experience the labor or child birth. Since he experienced the joy of inception he should also felt the joy of carrying and delivering a new life to the world. |
| 2017-09-13 22:43:02 |
Lana Wants to Share
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This is good, It would be nice to have a prequel with Lana and Jake. This may even be used to show why Lana would be initially surprised and shocked at the new face of Jake. As a follow up now that Jess found someone that could man up enough to take control unlike her past boy toys. Jess finds out that she now Jake's willing fuck toy/slave girl. Lana could still be on the fence but as it is kinda implied Lana is or was Jess sub just not sexually. She will of course fall in line. As for the knocking on the door, who else could be but the dorm monitor. Is it a co-ed dorm if so is the monitor a male or female? Does Jake already have the monitor under his thumb? This can go a lot of places, gaggedKitty please continue. |
| 2017-12-11 02:17:31 |
Mandy - Chapter Two - Her sexual awakening
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Very hot, please continue this series. |
| 2020-02-20 18:49:26 |
Mother's Submission - Chapter 4
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Love to see mom's friend turned as well. Made too serve as the head mistress. |