| 2015-01-16 15:11:31 |
Meeting Sam
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A good story, well written. I too like the contrast of white and black. |
| 2015-01-16 15:35:59 |
Hell of a Wake Up Call
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nice little read. Like Lucky, I hope there is a second part because you are just getting started. It would be a great series with Matt having sex with Ana and Anastasia without either of the girls knowing about it. |
| 2015-01-30 19:47:58 |
Naughty Babysitting Cousin
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nice little recollection of what had to be a magnificent memory. |
| 2015-01-30 17:16:19 |
The Island- Chapter 1
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hard to read due to the closeness of the paragraphs. Bad grammer made it hard to read. If you worked so long on it, you should have worked a little longer and proofread the story. A little research about the military would have also helped. Please do not continue unless you take the advice of the other readers. This site is full of shit, we dont need another continuation. |
| 2015-01-30 17:12:32 |
Only Girl in School - 1_(0)
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although brutal, the story was hot as hell. There was some missed letters. I feel a series telling of Katie's school life is a great idea. |