| 2015-01-07 18:36:17 |
Daddy Kisses are Heavenly
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I got confused on who was the friend and who was the daughter, and the previous comment is correct as well. |
| 2015-01-07 18:45:39 |
The Satan's Child
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The length and lack of detail of the physical attributes of the characters is the only complaint I can come up with. The writing was good. I almost didnt read it after reading the forward. I am glad I did. |
| 2015-01-07 18:52:36 |
NEVER A TEACHER
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interesting ideas but poorly portrayed in the text. |
| 2015-01-13 16:37:34 |
Virginity Adventure
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You gave a description of yourself but not of Bailey, other than height and weight. Tit size would have been nice to know. Normally 100lb 16 year olds do not have big tits but it would have been nice to know. Other than that and a few spelling errors it was a pretty good first story . |
| 2015-01-13 16:50:41 |
Bethany's Father
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Very nice little naughty story. |