| 2013-11-08 08:13:47 |
Test Dummy
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another incest-rial plot. There is so much incest on this site that I have almost stopped reading it, but you put a different twist, good job. |
| 2013-11-08 08:36:33 |
Young Casting Couch Virgin_(0)
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the writing was ok, but the plot and flow really sucked. |
| 2013-11-08 12:40:21 |
THE INTRUDER_(6)
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ever heard of paragraphs? |
| 2013-11-08 12:55:43 |
Laura and Mr B
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very good story Amy. The build up was really good but the sex seemed rushed. I hope part 2 will not be as rushed. |
| 2013-11-09 20:55:43 |
A trip back home never to forget.
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A lot of spelling errors. |