| 2013-11-04 08:13:13 |
Meagan's Desire
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I know you didnt write the story so the comments are really unneccesary but I have a few. How many girls carry a bikini in their purse? Did they drive a car or truck? |
| 2013-11-05 09:29:39 |
Going on Vacation
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Nice read. There is so much incest on this site, it was good to read a different twist. |
| 2013-11-07 13:27:05 |
White whore on the slave plantation pt 1
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you are crossing a lot of lines with this one. I am curious to see how it is accepted. One other point, there are no crocs in the south. |
| 2013-11-07 13:38:49 |
Going on Vacation Pt 2 - Resubmit
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not too bad, a few spelling errors and the sex was a little quick and uneventful, but it was enough for a positive rating. |
| 2013-11-08 07:53:29 |
Going on Vacation Pt 3
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the story keeps getting better, and so is your writing. Keep up the good woek. |