| 2014-01-24 18:45:11 |
My True Childhood Experience
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oh the sweet innocence of youth. nice little story. |
| 2014-02-04 20:59:31 |
"A Worthy Detention" Student and Principal
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typical..nothing erotic about this story at all. |
| 2014-02-11 17:28:23 |
My 25 year old step sister
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I am sorry. I tried to read this story but the lack or punctuation, paragraphs and all the spelling errors distracted me. |
| 2014-03-12 14:17:15 |
Little Preteen Toy
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Was hot until I read she was 8, that is very young. As for your writing, there were a few spelling errors, but not too many to take away from story. |
| 2014-03-12 14:38:36 |
New Princess In Trade For Old
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hot little story. I hope this is not the end. A few spelling errors and switch from 1st person to third then back to 1st Would have liked to have seen better description of Stephs body. |