| 2013-10-22 13:08:29 |
Halloween Frat Party Nightmare
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very well written story. The sex could have been described a little better,but it was enough to visualize. Keep up the good work. |
| 2013-10-22 14:39:07 |
Anna's Story
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I agree with the last comment, the changing from 3rd to 1st person was distracting and the details could have been better. Over all still a good story, good job. |
| 2013-10-22 15:05:37 |
Nympho at Large On The Farm
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Nice details. The beginning was a little shaky but it ended well. |
| 2013-10-24 11:30:34 |
Sister's Teenage Friends
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Very erotic story. Three hot sluts. Would have like to have had a description of his the girls looked, you know hair color, breast size, etc. Other than that, well written. jdm320 |
| 2013-10-24 11:30:40 |
Sister's Teenage Friends
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Very erotic story. Three hot sluts. Would have like to have had a description of his the girls looked, you know hair color, breast size, etc. Other than that, well written. jdm320 |