| 2013-11-12 09:03:25 |
The Story of Ann Chapter 6 Love on the Ranch as Devils Ride to Town
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Cant wait for the next chapter. Good Job Ann |
| 2013-11-18 12:58:50 |
the start of some great fun ( Pt 1 )
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The story was choppy. Try using quotation marks to being the conversation out. Check spelling too. |
| 2013-11-18 15:16:28 |
Sisters Boyfriend_(2)
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Bad grammar, bad punctuation, all ads up to bad story. |
| 2013-11-19 13:17:04 |
Me and my English teacher
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Unfortunately your writing style is not that good. |
| 2013-11-19 13:55:46 |
Mom's Medication
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Very hot story. I will be looking for part 2 |