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Comments from Hellcat41979
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2014-03-13 12:57:10 | Your Brain is my slave: Part 09 - A birthday to remember | Liked the story so far but did care for this last chapter. Particularly the sister dominating the brother who she was supposed to be under his complete control but I do prefer submissive females. Agree about limiting it to just ten chapters is a waste as the story has great potential. I also think the cousin would look good on a leash like a proper bitch. |
| 2014-10-20 02:49:35 | starship ecstasy | I appreciate you posting your story however I found it unreadable do to the lack of spacing. In the future I recommend double spacing your paragraphs. Also adding some tags wouldn't hurt. Do to this being your only story posted on this site I will give you the benefit of the doubt on these mistakes being unintentional. So I won't give you a negative vote but I also can't give it a positive either. I will commend you for for posting your creation for us to see and hope you will fix your mistakes on future posts. |
| 2015-01-04 20:53:50 | I caught 5 girls (part 1) | I agree about it moving to fast and I also see this is very similar to Cheerleaders rape and torture. Still I liked this story and would like to see it continued. |
| 2015-04-21 05:09:35 | The Aftermath 6 | Another good story Pars.. Though it does sadden me to know there will be no more chapters of this one. |
| 2015-05-02 18:34:54 | My Tortured Slave (Part 1) | Interesting story I hope you bring the next part out soon. |