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Comments from thejohnnyrotten
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2017-02-22 23:21:09 | Snow Angel | Great story ! Would love to read more of your work...... |
| 2017-09-06 04:10:23 | A New Day, The Other Me chapter 13 | Just checking in to see how things are going and to let you know that all your fans miss You! as always johnny rotten |
| 2017-09-06 05:38:39 | Boy am I glad I don't golf... | Great Story! A sequel? |
| 2017-09-24 16:23:55 | S.H.E.L.I.A. 3 | May I have some more please......lol |
| 2017-10-23 19:00:50 | Well, That Backfired_(1) | Okay you asked for it.... Sometimes the switching of perspective can get very confusing ( hence the name in capital) and extremely monotonous when this is done over the exact same time. You start to feel like a yo-yo jumping back to where it started each time. I think you nailed 'This' though! It was smooth and without a loss of train of thought. Now that discusses the writing style, let's go on to the plot..... You gave just enough information at the beginning so that it didn't feel like wham bam thank you ma'am but not too much that it wasn't tedious and slow. The characterization and plot so becoming extreme we're believable and on a hole can state that the story is interesting to read. So as to whether there should be a sequel or not? If it is of the quality of work you have shown here I would have to agree with the others thus far and say yes by all means! I look forward to reading more from you. Keep up the great work...... as always johnny rotten |