| 2014-10-19 20:01:30 |
A Family At Odds
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Lol wow that's so funny about my age being 14 I'm actually 40. And if you didn't like the story why did you even read it. I know its your opinion which isn't going to stop me from continuing the story. As for why Savannah wasn't in the last chapter of my first series. Well I will show the reason soon. To those that like my story stay tuned it will just get better. Thanks.....Hawk |
| 2015-08-12 17:38:51 |
Life: From Virginity to the Highest High and Lowest Low
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Very heart warming. Makes one think if there could be another chapter just saying. |
| 2015-01-05 01:20:02 |
Lia and Alex Part 1: Closer than friends.
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Nice start keep it up looking forward to the next chapter. |
| 2015-02-01 07:36:06 |
One in a Million (edited ver.)
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Loved the story. My type good start. It would be cool if Joseph survived. He shouldn't end like that maybe nature gives him a new lease on life with a sixth sense. Just a idea. Maybe he gives Derrick and his buddies a run for their money. Keep up the good work....Hawk |
| 2015-01-29 07:30:57 |
A New Day, A New You part 6
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Very nicely written two thumbs up |