| 2015-01-09 23:42:18 |
Predator in Suburbia
|
Surprise ending, wow. The Mike from across the street is also in Witness Protection also from New Jersey, small world. Some could say Fate or Destiny. Well done Mr. Writer. |
| 2015-01-10 03:19:14 |
Jamie and them
|
Smells like a duck, walks like a duck, and looks like a duck |
| 2015-01-08 19:57:09 |
Wild Riding to Dublin_(1)
|
Wow, how little I know of the world. I am only a wee bit of Irish. That small part tells me this tale could be true. I thank the writer. |
| 2015-01-08 20:47:59 |
a night away_(0)
|
To the above critic who could not find "savlon" in dictionaries. A Google search lead me to "Savlon Antiseptic Cream" A commercial product and likely trademarked. |
| 2015-01-09 08:02:16 |
Progenitor 2
|
Very creative story line. Also more of a mystery than other stories. Thank you for writing this piece. |