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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-02-10 06:15:27 | evil genius: Kathy | " Ian walked into 1. her room and saw 2. her laying on 3.her stomach trying to get to 4. her knees." This is a Style comment Use Janet's name first in slot 1. Next breakup those monster paragraphs. I worked a job and they said KISS, Keep It Simple Stupid, polite version. |
| 2015-02-10 06:27:51 | evil genius: Janet | " They walked inside and made their way to the bathroom. They took a long shower and got dressed. Ian said he would be back for her soon and left after a deep kiss. " This is my silly comment, Ian could easily invite Janet to a cafe for breakfast. Janet could accept or offer to prepare. This is a first breakfast after Ian & Janet's first night of passion. |
| 2015-02-10 06:46:54 | Forced Lust: Blinded (Part 1) | Well on Feb 9th this seems a tad to brutal. Then in this 21st Century we have the Hells Angels & Mongols who act just as heartless. I did hear it once that " there is nothing new under the Sun. " |
| 2015-02-10 07:01:38 | Slave Girl Liphx | Maybe because I am male, I feel the story is all foreplay and no sexual climax, that I could detect. I do see this is a story of seduction and the beginning of emotional bonding and a heart connection. Both complimentary aspect rarely honored on this Sex Stories site. I can relate to Anonymous reader "What the hell was that ? " It was female to female foreplay before sex. Maybe he never read it here, saw it here, or experienced in his life. |
| 2015-02-10 07:28:56 | Her Grotesque | " then she jerked, feeling something brush her ass cheek, it had gone to her rear. She grew panicky as the stone blocked her entire view, the hole was large, but all she could see was her back, her head was raised too high for her to lower it and see her ass and the creature. But she didn't need to anymore, this one was intelligent. " This is the last thought and feeling recorded. Nothing more which seems odd. I agree with Oreo the monsters are too disgusting. Just leave off the boils and puss. please. |