| 2019-11-17 06:12:45 |
King Dong
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I thought the story was fantastic but really should have been 2 separate tales. It seemed a bit odd to completely shift the main characters in the middle of it all. It all of a sudden just stopped being looked at from the perspective of Kathy, Jill and Liz and went on to Cora and Mindy. Having a part l and part ll would have allowed it to flow a lot better and would have allowed for a finality with the first 3 characters. |
| 2020-01-02 07:49:10 |
My Life. Ch. 1..._(0)
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Someone seems to be taking this story very personally. Well personally i thought it was a great FICTIONAL story and i look forward to reading more. Thanks for sharing. |
| 2020-01-12 17:46:19 |
Pete's inheritance (chapter 11)
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That's a whole lotta B.S. right there, but it sure is some good B.S. that's for sure. |
| 2020-01-14 01:44:57 |
Living The Dream - Chapter 1
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I respect the fact that that you didn't say you were packing 8-9 inches like everyone seems to say but 6' tall and 250 is a very large man. Guys that big who are muscular don't jog (very hard on the joints) and if they are that muscular hitting the gym 2 times a week ain't gonna make that happen. The other type of 6' 250lb guy isn't going to be a jogger either because the only shape they would be in is round. |
| 2020-04-15 07:40:27 |
Ranch Hand ch.3
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I think it's funny that out of all the bs in this story that the part that bugs me is the fact that they went to a place they said was "the ranch store" where they could buy ranch stuff for their ranch. It would be like me going to the apartment store to get stuff for my apartment. |