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Comments from alandee
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2020-05-28 04:42:55 | Naked Day - part 24 - New York next day | It almost seemed like this chapter of the story was written by a different author. The way the story flowed smoothly, one event into the other isn't as prevalent in this part of the tale. It seems choppier, start, stop, start, stop, with events not having any continuity. Maybe the author is getting bored with the story and writing just to get it over and done with. |
| 2020-06-01 22:08:12 | Naked Day - part 26 - California Girl | Yup, definitely not the same writer that started the series. |
| 2020-06-05 02:40:35 | Skeletons in my Closet part D | "That big cock of his hurt a bit as he filled me with it from behind. I pulled forward a bit to make it feel more comfortable. John slowed a bit as my pussy adjusted to his big cock." Am i reading this wrong or missing something, who's John? Is John Keith in the real world?" |
| 2020-06-06 01:44:47 | What a Difference a Summer Makes- Part 2 | Google "is Chinese a language?" It will tell you that there is no spoken language called Chinese. Look it up. |
| 2020-06-16 02:52:03 | Skeletons in my Closet part 15 | The only negative thing that I have to say is that it was to long in between chapters. I found myself looking for the next chapter on a daily basis. Glad it's finally here and I look forward to the next one. |