| 2020-06-18 07:23:34 |
Mother & Virgin Son--Part 3 of 3
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I really enjoyed the story. It is however the only story that I think that I have ever encountered where the main character is a virgin and by the end of the story is still a virgin. It almost seems like it could have been made up of 4 chapters. |
| 2020-06-18 20:46:44 |
Hobo - Chapter 10 & 11
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A lot of times people have to express their negative thoughts online because no one will listen to them in the real world, and nothing gets more attention then spiteful comments. Personally, I look forward to every new chapter, and not just for the sex, but because you have written a tale that has got me invested in the characters (but also for the sex). I say keep up the great writing. |
| 2020-06-20 02:44:17 |
Skeletons in my Closet part 16
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Two things crossed my mind reading this chapter. One was that it pissed me off reading that sure they were sorry and felt bad. So bad in fact that it took several months for them to stop having sex with one another after they were caught (hopefully my sarcasm came across like i hoped it would). The second thing is that it is the true sign of a good story and writer if they can get the reader emotionally involved, and its an even better writer that can get his reader pissed off with what is going on in their tale. Anxious to find out what is going on with Sara. Always leave them wanting more is the saying that applies i guess. |
| 2020-06-23 00:42:59 |
Skeletons in my Closet part 17
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A bit underwhelming. The anticipation of waiting to find out what happened between Keith and Sara as well as the almost uncontrollable hate that Meagan had, only to find out that the only thing that occurred was a handjob when they were in highschool. Not that big of a deal. Plus, everyone has a 1st love and with Linda and Sara being an obvious happy lesbian couple in love right now it is certainly not worth the hatred being shown by Meagan. |
| 2020-06-23 21:55:11 |
Skeletons in my Closet part 17
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My bad for being an armchair quarterback. I really do enjoy your writing and can't even begin to imagine the effort required to continuously have to come up with something new every few days. |