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Comments from evebroughtanaxthistime
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2016-08-02 08:53:07 | The Ritual_(0) | Oh man, been browsing around in the Golden Bough for a while and Frazer would have loved you for that scientific comment. He might have even written you letters and stuff after reading your story. Thank you for a remarkable story that will stay with me for a long time. |
| 2016-12-29 01:00:18 | A Song of Lust and Desire: Chapter V: The One In Which Cat Meets a Catspaw | Poorly written, my foot. What do you expect on a site that publishes smut - fine art? Get real. This was a worthwhile read. |
| 2016-12-29 01:05:17 | A Song of Lust and Desire: Chapter VIII: The One In Which There Is A Dothraki Wedding | Give me more. |
| 2016-12-29 03:42:40 | Giving into Darkness (Pt 4) | Yep, please don't stop now. It's a cool story promising some adventure further on and I would like to know what happens. Advice: drop the word 'would'. It's scrambling the tenses within your sentences. |
| 2016-10-15 10:12:09 | The Invitation - A Halloween Story | Hope you're happy. You made a girl cry. I'm sitting here blubbering like a bloody teenager. And it feels so good! (Not the teenager part.) You are truly a maestro with composition. I wish I could lick the inside of your mind, but that would just be gross. So thanks once again and then again! You have lovely stuff between your ears. |