| 2011-01-19 08:34:30 |
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Excellent! (But wasn't his brow furloughed or furrowed -- rather than furloughed?) |
| 2011-01-23 04:16:34 |
Trapped_(0)
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Get a proof-reader (or just do two stories so you can fix the stuff spell-checkers miss - like homonyms: to, too, or two). The content is good. Your presentation needs some polish. Keep it cuming -- oops, I meant coming. [ha ha ha] |
| 2011-01-31 23:42:39 |
My New Houseplant 1
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Great! I enjoy stories "written by women" (because I am not a woman). Well presented! I would enjoy more (but you'll have to find the "sprouts.") Only ONE typo' -- 'burrowed' would be the spelling of 'borrowed.' |
| 2011-01-31 23:43:17 |
My New Houseplant 1
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Great! I enjoy stories "written by women" (because I am not a woman). Well presented! I would enjoy more (but you'll have to find the "sprouts.") Only ONE typo' -- 'burrowed' would be the spelling of 'borrowed.' |
| 2011-01-31 23:43:37 |
My New Houseplant 1
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Great! I enjoy stories "written by women" (because I am not a woman). Well presented! I would enjoy more (but you'll have to find the "sprouts.") Only ONE typo' -- 'burrowed' would be the spelling of 'borrowed.' |