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Comments from MartinJD
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2012-01-17 03:43:06 | Swinging in the Neighborhood | You've really got to check the spelling (by proof-reading it -- otherwise you'll miss any correctly-spelled homonyms). As I clicked the vote-button, great tale! (So good it just drips with reality!) |
| 2012-02-01 07:03:44 | From Lonely Unfilled Housewife to Perverted Slut Part 1 | You told part one of your story wonderfully. (Please -- if you can -- use "scared" to replace those two "scarred" ocurrences, thanks.) |
| 2012-02-15 11:16:26 | CAW 10 *The Best Decision I Made* | As already said, "Great Story!" It's always and truly a pleasure to read fabulous prose. Your style seems as young as you've stated your age... flowing from headings & titles to your 'Introduction' then the subheadings are there but the words of your story prevail 'til the end. Also, thanks to the proof'er (and you again, for brilliant prose)! |
| 2012-07-10 20:36:08 | I am giving your story a (+) rating here. The typeset presentation (back in the forum), is vastly better (and I mean because of the typesetting). |
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| 2012-08-15 15:41:00 | I AM NUMBER 69 (CAW 12 Entry) | ClaireBare, Earlier (CAW 10 & 11), I fantasized of writing. Educated as an engineer, I sought to build a plan .. a strategy (if you will) to create suitable contribution to this "CAW" event .. as well as more. Like so many things, this too resembles an iceberg: what you see is so much less than the whole of it. The fantasy you've presented is fabulous. Yours is the 3rd (or 4th) of the CAW#12 entries I have read. I plan to make further notes after reading other entries. Sincerely, MartinJD 8-D |