| 2015-09-02 15:23:56 |
Catching Emily/Eileen
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I look forward to reading more adventures of this nicely entangled family. Your descriptions and writing are very real. I sit here, stroking my continuously hard cock, delaying for hours my cum. When I do, it is intense, like those you describe in your stories. Keep up the good works! Keep them cumming!!!!!!! MORE! |
| 2015-06-05 14:14:02 |
Barb-a-que2
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Comments here are saying things like "I'm so wet"," You're a great writer", etc. Your stories are nice, but all you have the guy do is cop a feel, undress them with no suspense or slow, sexy description, and shove his dick in and drop a load. Take a little time with your writing, slow down and give some real foreplay, and then make the fuck last a few paragraphs. Describe the feelings of cock in cunt, mouth on nipple, cunt to cunt with two females. Make the reader enjoy the cum that THEY get from reading your story. Just my HBAO. |
| 2015-06-07 13:07:43 |
An incest birthday
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Great story. I have read the entire series once, and all are saved on my favorites. I am waiting, not so patiently, for the next chapter. Please write Chapter 32 soon! |
| 2015-06-29 17:33:47 |
An Incest Birthday Chapter 32
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Great story, from Chapter 1 all the way through. Your new editor, however, needs to know where to put new paragraphs some times. Your first paragraph, as well as a few others, need to be broken up into ohter paragraphs. Maybe it is the way it is loaded on this site, but they are so harder to read, simply because they are WAY TOO LONG. Just my HBAO. Other than that, you are a great writer, and, truthfully, I enjoy the minutia of the story over the SEX, although that is very important on a porn site. LOL. |
| 2015-09-06 01:22:50 |
Becoming a Master Ch 1 edit
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My only suggestion is this - from my personal experience, the slave offers themselves to the Master/Mistress. However, it is the Master/Mistress that takes the slave onto their service. After that, the slave has no rights, no decisions to make, and no option to refuse any type of service to the Master/Mistress that they tell them to do. This a total surrender of their ENTIRE life to the person they go into service with. The other option Domination/submission. Again the submissive offers their service, the Dom/Domme accepts, BUT - the sub sets pre-agreed to limits ( no scat, no blood, nor group sex, etc.) and they agree on a "safe word" which the sub may utter at anytime to stop what ever activity the Dom/Domme orders them to do. You are diong a great job here, keep it up!!!!!!!!!! More!!!!!! |