| 2015-10-13 14:01:29 |
Inseminating Mom
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Awesome story. Great work on the difficulty of Mom making the decision to have her son impregnate her. You took your time, developed the thinking of the mother as she wrestled with her desires versus her "morality" of having sex with her son - INCEST! She really tried NOT to let it happen, but then realized her true desires, and let it happen. Fucking Mrs. Walker was just that - FUCKING. He wanted her, she NEEDED to be fucked, and they did it. Great story, with very good development. A Part 2 would be nice, but this is a nice "stand alone" story as well. |
| 2015-12-20 15:41:51 |
My adventures with Kasey part 3
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Part 4, PLEASE. I know you just posted this, but, BRING IT ON! |
| 2015-12-30 14:21:51 |
Broken And Drunk
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Not bad, although, as many on here comment, you need to read a couple times BEFORE publishing. Grammar is important. You can not blame the website for your bad grammar and/or spelling. One other thing, you removed her pantie and kissed them, but then next paragraph you are removing them again. It's the little things. |
| 2016-01-29 21:16:12 |
Father and daughter
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A 20 yr old with a 17 yr old roommate at college? Really? And a 20 yr old that knows NOTHING about sex and the difference between males and females? Also, where the hell was the 17 yr old roomie during this fuck? The daughter talks like a 12 yr old. Hope the next chapters are better. 5 out of 20! |
| 2016-03-01 17:25:00 |
It’s Good to be a Little Bad Part 3 of 3
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Anonymous reader 2016-03-01 15:54:22 is a fool. Yes, of course we knew that the outcome would be what it was. It was a very good story, and the only recommendation I would make is that there needed to be a little more detail during the sex acts. More plunging, more pounding during the fucking, more rubbing of or teasing of the clits and nipples, more detail about the cunnilingus and fellatio parts. Make us really "feel" the act in your writing. Part 4 would be the story of next summers visit, and it would expand to include the librarian, possible only in 3somes with Mark and Roger, or Mark and his sister. just a suggestion. |