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Comments from Dudley Dowrong
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2019-11-08 14:32:19 | A Family Betrayal Chapter 12 | Great that he remembered Family as a motivation for his excelled position that puts him at the top of his class. Story is going great. Eager to see relationship between Mitchell & Jack (aka Adam) rekindled,; When is Keshia going to make her move, trying to protect Heath form her Dad & his goons. I like the way the plot unfolds.Good jopb. |
| 2019-11-10 01:22:47 | A Family Betrayal Chapter 22 | Hawk, Ur de***********ion of the action in this chapter is surpurbe. I expect the next chapter with Jackie & Faye to be just as hot; not a skip over. THis is an example of what love should be. .Each partner goes away from the union sated, relaxed, fulfilled and uplifted. That's the pleasure for which our bodies were deigned. Anything less takes LOVE out of the union. Good job still on the series! |
| 2019-11-10 04:22:13 | A Family Betrayal Chapter 24 | I'm not worried about Tyrone. I want to know who Allison is. Also when :& how his Godmothers rape or seduce Heath? Jackie, Jack ,Adam & Kaye can tale care of Tyrone. Add the 4 wives to that mix & they are unbeatable. This diversion adds good background to the story overall. |
| 2019-11-11 11:08:58 | A Family Betrayal Chapter 27 | The new story doesn't "grab" me like "Family Betrayal". Seem the Friday Night Fuck has been going on for some time because of the sister's remark, "You're our man" interperted, "We're going to bring you into our Friday Night Fuck. just not quite yet. To Family Betrayal", Is Paula's lover Tyrone or Carington? What is going on with the 4 kids? Like I said earlier, a lot of intrigue for a simple "SexStory", more like a gangster plot..Good work! |
| 2019-11-12 13:22:40 | A Family Betrayal Chapter 33 | The tenderness U display in Ur sex scenes ls remarkable. Mosty only women authors are as tender, loving & detailed as to the act of such intimate loving. |