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Comments from Dudley Dowrong
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2019-11-12 13:22:40 | A Family Betrayal Chapter 33 | The tenderness U display in Ur sex scenes ls remarkable. Mosty only women authors are as tender, loving & detailed as to the act of such intimate loving. |
| 2019-11-12 13:22:40 | A Family Betrayal Chapter 33 | The tenderness U display in Ur sex scenes ls remarkable. Mosty only women authors are as tender, loving & detailed as to the act of such intimate loving. |
| 2019-11-12 13:22:40 | A Family Betrayal Chapter 33 | The tenderness U display in Ur sex scenes ls remarkable. Mosty only women authors are as tender, loving & detailed as to the act of such intimate loving. |
| 2019-11-13 18:45:06 | A Family Betrayal Chapter 34 | Greeness, I'm not sure what U mean? Tense, prons, missuse of words, grammar is terrible. He needs a proofreader ( the one he claims isn't very good! Great plot & details iM reading them ALL! |
| 2019-11-18 01:43:24 | A Family At Odds Chapter 2 | When did I vote on this story? I don't remember the story,series & surely not voting..Some of the same grammar errors here as "A Family Betrayal" Again, good scenario! Excellent details of action. Looking forward as to how it all works out (or in as the case may be). The introduction of Tammy, Candy & Alex was classic . Another trumped up charge & potential false arrest & kidnapping. Knowing the Sheriff, I don't believe it will happen! ... |