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Comments from Dudley Dowrong
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2019-11-18 01:43:30 | A Family At Odds Chapter 2 | When did I vote on this story? I don't remember the story,series & surely not voting..Some of the same grammar errors here as "A Family Betrayal" Again, good scenario! Excellent details of action. Looking forward as to how it all works out (or in as the case may be). The introduction of Tammy, Candy & Alex was classic . Another trumped up charge & potential false arrest & kidnapping. Knowing the Sheriff, I don't believe it will happen! ... |
| 2019-11-18 01:43:31 | A Family At Odds Chapter 2 | When did I vote on this story? I don't remember the story,series & surely not voting..Some of the same grammar errors here as "A Family Betrayal" Again, good scenario! Excellent details of action. Looking forward as to how it all works out (or in as the case may be). The introduction of Tammy, Candy & Alex was classic . Another trumped up charge & potential false arrest & kidnapping. Knowing the Sheriff, I don't believe it will happen! ... |
| 2019-11-19 13:05:03 | A Family At Odds Chapter 11 Final? | Finally, a story/series with an ending (unlike "A Good Day to Die" & "A Family Betrayal") I know with the grammar & technical issues (then for than, misused words, to for too, etc.)take from the overall experience of a good read, but the concept of the plot &: details of the action (erotic & fighting) is exceptional. I'm disappointed U didn't bring Candy or Tammy back into the plot. They were good characters Also surprised Maya didn't play more of a sexual role in the plot. She sounded cute. Thanks for sharing Ur talent with Ur fans. |
| 2019-11-19 13:05:04 | A Family At Odds Chapter 11 Final? | Finally, a story/series with an ending (unlike "A Good Day to Die" & "A Family Betrayal") I know with the grammar & technical issues (then for than, misused words, to for too, etc.)take from the overall experience of a good read, but the concept of the plot &: details of the action (erotic & fighting) is exceptional. I'm disappointed U didn't bring Candy or Tammy back into the plot. They were good characters Also surprised Maya didn't play more of a sexual role in the plot. She sounded cute. Thanks for sharing Ur talent with Ur fans. |
| 2019-11-19 17:19:08 | TRAILER TRASH TEEN ch.1 | Tina is NOT BASHFUL at all ,especially with Joey. My 2nd or 3rd tie to read in the last 3 yfrs. Look forward to enjoying again. |