| 2018-11-22 00:19:20 |
The Dog Days of Summer_(1)
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Wonderfully written! I agree with @albertofatto 100%. You have taken what could have been something that was perceived as "disgusting" and gave it a life of its own. Your deion to the little things make this story work. You are an amazing writer. |
| 2018-11-22 14:09:03 |
The Chauffeur(#9)....VEGAS BABY!
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Thank You! Your words are flattering. FYI the next chapter is nearly finished. I expect to complete it and do the proofreading over the Thanksgiving holiday weekend. |
| 2018-11-27 07:48:18 |
My wife's dream come true
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Something always erotic when you share someone you love with another. Well written. |
| 2018-11-27 07:54:55 |
My wife's dream come true 2
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The first story was well thought out. This one, nice story but...... |
| 2018-11-27 21:21:49 |
The Chauffeur (#10)..Making it Great Again (part one)
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@scottMaster, I'm glad you love the story. This particular chapter is 19,000 words long (the longest yet) and it's only a part 1 of 2. Thank you for the kind words. Out of curiosity, did you figure out Dakota's question before David figured it out? |