| 2018-12-14 21:19:46 |
Hearts
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I agree with White Walls. Well crafted first story! Keep writing! |
| 2018-12-16 20:27:53 |
Roleplaying
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Delightfully well written and very erotic. Moved fast enough to keep one interested but not so quick to leave one saying WTF. You have a real talent. I hope you keep writing. |
| 2018-12-17 13:30:40 |
The Chauffeur (#10)..Making it Great Again (part one)
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Thank you Cutt1 for your nice words. Chapter #12 is waiting to be published. I originally posted it, but then realized I made a couple of big errors (I crossed names with another story that I'm writing). I had to take it down and make the corrections. It has been in the 'pending' file since Thursday. Hopefully, it will be republished today. I'm working on Chapter #13 currently. |
| 2018-12-17 14:27:46 |
The Chauffeur(#11)..Making it Great Again (part two)
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I had posted chapter #12 but had to take it down as I realized that I had switched names a couple of places with character names from another story i'm writing. It is sitting in the waiting to be published file of this website. Hopefully it will get published either today or tomorrow. I'm already working on chapter 13 along with chapter 3 of Three Daughters and chapter 2 of The Swing......hope everyone enjoys them all. |
| 2018-12-17 16:27:53 |
The Chauffeur (#12), LA
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Thank you scottMaster for the kind words. I had to take it down for a couple of days. I made a name error with another story I'm writing and needed to correct the error. Chapter 13 is in the works. |