| 2011-10-30 04:06:33 |
peeping tom_(2)
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Damned good job. What the hell is with these people who constantly need to find something to complain about? It's a great story that was well thought out, which anyone with decent judgement would recognize. Ignore them and get your ass to work on part two. (but proof a little better to clear off the typos) |
| 2011-12-05 19:06:41 |
Babysitting Benny - Chapter 3
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This is a very good story and a well written series. The rating isn't bad but it certainly deserves to be higher than it is. |
| 2011-12-21 03:48:49 |
Berry Patch Cherry Picker Chapter 1
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I see that someone else picked up on the fact that he's DAVID, not Jason. |
| 2012-04-29 15:20:53 |
THE SECOND CHANCE: VIOLET EYES
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Very well told tale but it really wasn't a second chance. God gave him all the winners, the second time around. Looks, money, stamina, nice big cock and beautiful hot, horny, tight pussied woman who loved him as much as he loved her. |
| 2012-05-17 16:52:40 |
A Game of Inches - Part Seven
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Instead of writing this as a freebee, you should have written a book and had it published. It's THAT GOOD. |